Amelia C.

Personal Essay

Everyone should have a awesome friend like Rachel.  She helps you when you fall or get hurt but most of all she is SO nice! That's why I think you should have a great friend like Rachel.

One reason that Rachel is a awesome friend is When I fall or get hurt Rachel helps me up. One time I fell off the monkey bars then Rachel came running over to me and she helped me up. Another time I fell Rachel was playing with her friends then she stopped what she was doing and ran over to me and help me up.

Another reason that you should have a great friend like Rachel when I am sad she cheers me up. You will never believe one time Rachel was being so funny I laughed for 30 minutes.              

Most important why you should have a great friend like Rachel is because she is so nice to you. She helps you when you are sad. She also is a great friend to work with on a project. Me and Rachel have got 20 pages  Rachel is such a good partner to work with. When you work with her you get so much done--that's why you should have a great friend like Rachel.         

  

I feel that everyone should have a great friend like Rachel because when someone gets hurt she will come and help them up. She's so nice--that's why you should have a awesome friend likes Rachel.